Feedback on Profiling Piece (Prof. G Craig)

I haven’t managed to go into HSAD today as I am unwell, therefore I cant go and physically see Carmen to gain face to face feedback. I have tried to send an email to ask however, my laptop keeps coming up with error issues. As time is pressing on I am worried that I wont have chance to see Carmen before my deadline. Due to this I am just going to submit what I have for the piece, this is better than not submitting anything. I have checked my grammar and spelling, I have asked peers there opinions on the piece and how to improve it.

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