In the last few days, I have completed the research needed and drawn up a draft. I emailed Carmen and asked her for feedback. She replied and gave me some pointers to improve it. These included things like:
- Spelling and Grammar
- Sentence structuring – tighten sentences, write them in layman’s terms
- Add more information on the victim: ie age, where originally from and where trafficked etc
Now having this feedback, I can make changes to improve the piece and make it read smoother. I feel like I have really learned key skills over the last year and feel more confident in asking for advice.