Draft of my first story

Due to my operation tomorrow, I have shown Carmen what I have so far on my story she gave me some valuable advice but said to leave it now until I return. She made notes on the printout and mentioned that I need to find key statistic and I said that I’ve put an FOI request together and that I’m going to find whom to send it to tomorrow before I go down to the theater, this will occupy my mind and make time fly.

She mentioned that I needed to look at my sentence structuring and spelling.

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