Indesign (Indesign mock ups)

From making digital mock ups of my sketches, I have noticed a few issues and asked for feedback from others. The issues noticed it that its is just to basic and not creative enough. What I have shown is that I can put information into a layout. This is far to formal and not immersive enough. I am going to scrap what I’ve done and start again, making it more gripping for the audience. I will use more designs and look deeper at the content in a more fun and exciting way.